
Hello, friends!
Remember the haiku roundup I shared awhile ago? Here’s a sequel.:)
clumsy
what love it would take
to die to win a heart that
loves so clumsily!
effervescence
her effervescence
spilled from a deeper spring than
her frail emotions.
guitar
vibrating steel sings,
bouncing beauty through a void
and echoing joy.
laurel
You were crowned victor –
yet You placed the laurel wreath
on my guilty head.
starlight
starlight pricks the sky…
shatters the hold of darkness…
offers midnight hope.
diamond
diamond in the rough –
mere carbon turned gem by the
press of deepest pain.
Thank you to all of the Instagram friends who shared the prompts with me!
Did you have a favorite haiku?
❤ Laurel
All so beautifully profound! 🥺
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Thank you, Emma! ❤
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So welcome! 🤍
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Aww, I love these! Especially the diamond one! So much beauty and truth in such short poems!
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I’m so glad!! It’s definitely a challenge to use those seventeen syllables wisely.😅
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So beautiful! Thank you for these – you write such gorgeous poetry that points so poignantly back to Jesus.
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Thanks so much, Vanessa! I’m really happy it can be a blessing. ❤
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I think that ‘clumsy’ might be my favorite!
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I really like that one, too!
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these are absolutely lovely!
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Thank you, Esmerelda!✨
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